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I strapped on my shoes and pressed play. I walked to where ever
Sat on the world and watched it deflate like it was yesterday's birthday balloon.
Full of stale air.

I knew how many numbers I had, they were all counted for.  All of them made zero
Slept on a stairway and woke up feeling like a forgotten umbrella.
Useful and rusty.

I built a castle of clouds and ignored the irony. I swallowed it whole
Provoked a rainbow out of hiding to see it burn a place in my retina.
Multicolored and grainy.

I spoke exhaust because I couldn't stop. Pollution warnings blared out
Wrote poetry and visuals like it would save my life.
Full of stale air.



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©2009 ~dancingtrees
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Author's Comments

I'm so tired(!) but felt like writing something.

This is what happens, so I wouldn't recommend it.



don't try to understand it, it's headache provoking.

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yea..i don't really get it lolz

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I don't get it either... but I like the "I built a castle of clouds and ignored the irony" that's so good.XD
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lolz, course you were tired you were on for a while last night.

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....i like it.....*you are breath taking*


i love your writings.

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:icondancingtrees:
aww thank you!
I hope it didn't break anything.... :P I read it again , trying to understand it and it kind broke my mind.

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yeah, but i wrote this before staying on for so long :P!

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-Genius is born of inspiration, and inspiration is born from bordeom

-Pandas will rule the world!
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oh thanks! haha I kinda like that part too hehe

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-Let the inspiration flow

-Genius is born of inspiration, and inspiration is born from bordeom

-Pandas will rule the world!
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lolz....

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this was a little depressing for some reason. i liked the last paragraph though.
and its always fun to read your stuff. keep it up!

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